Friday 30 November 2012

The Road - full review of the road

Shorn of history and context, Cormac McCarthy's other nine novels could be cast as rungs, with The Road as a pinnacle. This is a very great novel, but one that needs a context in both the past and in so-called post-9/11 America.

We can divide the contemporary American novel into two traditions, or two social classes. The Tough Guy tradition comes up from Fenimore Cooper, with a touch of Poe, through Melville, Faulkner and Hemingway. The Savant tradition comes from Hawthorne, especially through Henry James, Edith Wharton and Scott Fitzgerald. You could argue that the latter is liberal, east coast/New York, while the Tough Guys are gothic, reactionary, nihilistic, openly religious, southern or fundamentally rural.
The Savants' blood line (curiously unrepresentative of Americans generally) has gained undoubted ascendancy in the literary firmament of the US. Upper middle class, urban and cosmopolitan, they or their own species review themselves. The current Tough Guys are a murder of great, hopelessly masculine, undomesticated writers, whose critical reputations have been and still are today cruelly divergent, adrift and largely unrewarded compared to the contemporary Savant school. In literature as in American life, success must be total and contrasted "failure" fatally dispiriting.

But in both content and technical riches, the Tough Guys are the true legislators of tortured American souls. They could include novelists Thomas McGuane, William Gaddis, Barry Hannah, Leon Rooke, Harry Crews, Jim Harrison, Mark Richard, James Welch and Denis Johnson. Cormac McCarthy is granddaddy to them all. New York critics may prefer their perfidy to be ignored, comforting themselves with the superlatives for All the Pretty Horses, but we should remember that the history of Cormac McCarthy and his achievement is not an American dream but near on 30 years of neglect for a writer who, since The Orchard Keeper in 1965, produced only masterworks in elegant succession. Now he has given us his great American nightmare.

The Road is a novel of transforming power and formal risk. Abandoning gruff but profound male camaraderie, McCarthy instead sounds the limits of imaginable love and despair between a diligent father and his timid young son, "each other's world entire". The initial experience of the novel is sobering and oppressive, its final effect is emotionally shattering.

America - and presumably the world - has suffered an apocalypse the nature of which is unclear and, faced with such loss, irrelevant. The centre of the world is sickened. Earthquakes shunt, fire storms smear a "cauterised terrain", the ash-filled air requires slipshod veils to cover the mouth. Nature revolts. The ruined world is long plundered, with canned food and good shoes the ultimate aspiration. Almost all have plunged into complete Conradian savagery: murdering convoys of road agents, marauders and "bloodcults" plunder these wastes. Most have resorted to cannibalism. One passing brigade is fearfully glimpsed: "Bearded, their breath smoking through their masks. The phalanx following carried spears or lances ... and lastly a supplementary consort of catamites illclothed against the cold and fitted in dogcollars and yoked each to each." Despite this soul desert, the end of God and ethics, the father still defines and endangers himself by trying to instil moral values in his son, by refusing to abandon all belief.

All of this is utterly convincing and physically chilling. The father is coughing blood, which forces him and his son, "in their rags like mendicant friars sent forth to find their keep", on to the treacherous road southward, towards a sea and - possibly - survivable, milder winters. They push their salvage in a shopping cart, wryly fitted with a motorcycle mirror to keep sentinel over that road behind. The father has a pistol, with two bullets only. He faces the nadir of human and parental existence; his wife, the boy's mother, has already committed suicide. If caught, the multifarious reavers will obviously rape his son, then slaughter and eat them both. He plans to shoot his son - though he questions his ability to do so - if they are caught. Occasionally, between nightmares, the father seeks refuge in dangerously needy and exquisite recollections of our lost world.

They move south through nuclear grey winter, "like the onset of some cold glaucoma dimming away the world", sleeping badly beneath filthy tarpaulin, setting hidden campfires, exploring ruined houses, scavenging shrivelled apples. We feel and pity their starving dereliction as, despite the profound challenge to the imaginative contemporary novelist, McCarthy completely achieves this physical and metaphysical hell for us. "The world shrinking down to a raw core of parsible entities. The names of things slowly following those things into oblivion. Colours. The names of birds. Things to eat. Finally the names of things one believed to be true."

Such a scenario allows McCarthy finally to foreground only the very basics of physical human survival and the intimate evocation of a destroyed landscape drawn with such precision and beauty. He makes us ache with nostalgia for restored normality. The Road also encapsulates the usual cold violence, the biblical tincture of male masochism, of wounds and rites of passage. His central character can adopt a universal belligerence and misanthropy. In this damnation, rightly so, everyone, finally, is the enemy. He tells his son: "My job is to take care of you. I was appointed by God to do that ... We are the good guys." The other uncomfortable, tellingly national moment comes when the father salvages perhaps the last can of Coke in the world. This is truly an American apocalypse.

The vulnerable cultural references for this daring scenario obviously come from science fiction. But what propels The Road far beyond its progenitors are the diverted poetic heights of McCarthy's late-English prose; the simple declamation and plainsong of his rendered dialect, as perfect as early Hemingway; and the adamantine surety and utter aptness of every chiselled description. As has been said before, McCarthy is worthy of his biblical themes, and with some deeply nuanced paragraphs retriggering verbs and nouns that are surprising and delightful to the ear, Shakespeare is evoked. The way McCarthy sails close to the prose of late Beckett is also remarkable; the novel proceeds in Beckett-like, varied paragraphs. They are unlikely relatives, these two artists in old age, cornered by bleak experience and the rich limits of an English pulverised down through despair to a pleasingly wry perfection. "He rose and stood tottering in that cold autistic dark with his arms out-held for balance while the vestibular calculations in his skull cranked out their reckonings. An old chronicle."

Set piece after set piece, you will read on, absolutely convinced, thrilled, mesmerised with disgust and the fascinating novelty of it all: breathtakingly lucky escapes; a complete train, abandoned and alone on an embankment; a sudden liberating, joyous discovery or a cellar of incarcerated amputees being slowly eaten. And everywhere the mummified dead, "shrivelled and drawn like latterday bogfolk, their faces of boiled sheeting, the yellowed palings of their teeth".

All the modern novel can do is done here. After the great historical fictions of the American west, Blood Meridian and The Border Trilogy, The Road is no artistic pinnacle for McCarthy but instead a masterly reclamation of those midnight-black, gothic worlds of Outer Dark (1968) and the similarly terrifying but beautiful Child of God (1973). How will this vital novel be positioned in today's America by Savants, Tough Guys or worse? Could its nightmare vistas reinforce those in the US who are determined to manipulate its people into believing that terror came into being only in 2001? This text, in its fragility, exists uneasily within such ill times. It's perverse that the scorched earth which The Road depicts often brings to mind those real apocalypses of southern Iraq beneath black oil smoke, or New Orleans - vistas not unconnected with the contemporary American regime.

One night, when the father thinks that he and his son will starve to death, he weeps, not about the obvious but about beauty and goodness, "things he'd no longer any way to think about". Camus wrote that the world is ugly and cruel, but it is only by adding to that ugliness and cruelty that we sin most gravely. The Road affirms belief in the tender pricelessness of the here and now. In creating an exquisite nightmare, it does not add to the cruelty and ugliness of our times; it warns us now how much we have to lose. It makes the novels of the contemporary Savants seem infantile and horribly over-rated. Beauty and goodness are here aplenty and we should think about them. While we can.
http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2006/nov/04/featuresreviews.guardianreview4

The Road - quotes and relevence to the woman 1

P.17 "From daydreams on the road there was no waking ... freeze this frame. Now call down your dark and your cold and be damned."

Representation:
-Sanity.
-What the man wants.
-The mans life before.
-The mans ove for his wife.
-Memorys of his wifes body and feeling.
-Forgeting her slowly.
-Wealth as they were at the theater.

Thematic:
-Memory.
-Regret.
-Hate (of the man towards himself) .
-Dreams.
-Art.
-Wealth.
-Love.
-Sadness.
-Loss.
-Past.

Symbolic:
-Sex through the womans actions, showing her to be more dominant in this area.
-Love through how close they are.
-Maddness with the man walking through his daydream.
-The wealh shown in the memory mirrors the value of the memory to him.
-Death as he tells either the memory or reader to be damned.

Structural:
-short sentences when coming back to reality from th daydream.

The Road - reasons for why there are so few refrences to women

-The man wans to forget his wife.
-They are unimportant to the daily life of the man and the boy.
-Women symbolize life and reproduction, there is no more life in the world and no new life.
-The wife could not kill the boy, so she had no reason to be in the narrative.
-The mother is dead.
-The relationship between the father and son is more established.
-Mother earth is changed in the book to the dead earth. women equal death.
-The boy would not be so nieve if the woman had been alive.
-The mother was resourceful as she knew they would all die, the story of the man ad boy is about stalling this.

Wednesday 28 November 2012

The Road - screenplay for opening to episode 1

-- (the man and the wife are sat together looking younger in a golden theater, the woman then moves the mans hand into her lap, turns her head towards the man and smiles)

-switch scene

--(man wakes up breathing hard, looks over to the boy and hecks to see if he is breathing, when the man finds that he is, he then starts to reath a a more normal rate.)

-fade out

--(man is standing with binoculars.)

-switch to mans view

---(camera surveys a bleak grey city landscape)

Man: No smoke. Nothing to see.
Boy: Can I see?
Man: Yes. Ofcourse you can.

--(Boy looks through binoculars, adjusts the wheel)

Man: What do you see?
Boy: Nothing.

--(Boy lowers the binoculars)

Boy: It's raining.
Man: Yes. I know.

-fade out

--(the womans face turning to smile at the camera as though from the mans perspective in the previous dream)

The Road - 3 part episodes

Episode 1 - a dream sequence of theman and woman in a golden theater, introduction of man and boy the flash backs to the woman between episodes of consiquence between man and boy. ends with wallet being placed in the road with the picture of his wife upon it.

Episode 2 - roadrat is killed, the encounter with the lightning struck man and the man and boy walking into the cellar full of half eaten people. ends with man and boy running away from the house into the field.

Episode 3 - opens with man and boy asleep in field, walk to beach, food from boat and cart eing stolen then being found, man shot by arrow, they walk on and then the man dies and the boy walks of with new fmilly.

Friday 23 November 2012

The Road - reveiws of the road

Add another to Cormac McCarthy’s growing list of masterpieces. McCarthy’s new novel, The Road, combines Blood Meridian’s terse, poetic meditations on the horrific depths of human depravity with the taut, thriller writing found in his most recent work, No Country for Old Men. What separates The Road from his other works is McCarthy’s ability to capture moments of lyrical and emotional beauty in a father and son’s haunted relationship even as a silent cloud of death covers the world in darkness.
Pros
  • Sears its mark into your mind from the first sentence to weeks after you’ve put it down.
  • Reveals the strength of a father’s love for his son in the bleakest of circumstances.
  • Written by a master author who knows how to make every word count.
  • Involves a post-apocalyptic world that is frighteningly realized.
Cons
  • Only recommended for aged and bold readers
mike sulivan  -  http://bestsellers.about.com/od/fictionreviews/gr/road_mccarthy.htm



The Road is a tale of a father and his son, set in a post-apocalyptic world (“barren, silent, godless”). The weather is harsh, and humans and other living forms have become rare. Both are on the road, moving towards south where they are hoping to have a better chance of survival. They move through deserted houses, scouring for food, fighting the bitter cold and snow, and hiding from other survivors who could be looters or cannibals. Both father’s and son’s physical condition are deteriorating.
The father is protective and is almost apologetic for bringing the son into this terrifying world. He is willing to be ruthless and take more risks to survive, unlike his son. The son is, on the other hand, more compassionate. He represents the goodness that believes in helping others. We can understand this in the event where the son sees a little child and wants to help him. But his father insists that they continue moving. In another event, a thief runs away with their belongings. The father catches the thief and wants to be punish him but the son pleads with the father not to be cruel.
While reading this novel, we can sense the tenderness and love that the father has for his son, and we also experience the child’s innocence and love for his father. Indeed, something beautiful can exist on the canvas of a terrible world.
McCarthy’s style of writing is about imagery, whether he is describing the beach: “at the tide line a woven mat of weeds and the ribs of fishes in their millions stretching along the shore… Senseless. Senseless.” Or whether he is describing the boy: “The boy’s candlecolored skin was all but translucent. With his great staring eyes he’d the look of an alien”.
His style is also detail-oriented, making the setting plausible. For instance, the man and his son find an unoccupied bunker. McCarthy gives a detailed description of the bunker, describing the iron cots, the wall, the floor, crates of canned food, the lantern, and the utensils.
The two characters – the father and his son - are nameless throughout the novel. We read on because we want to know what happens to these two. Will they both survive? Where will they end up? Or perhaps another reason we keep turning the pages is the curiosity to know more about this distraught world that McCarthy has created with so much detail.
If nothing else, the book makes us appreciate what we have in our present life and probably also warns us not to tinker with forces that can create havoc.
http://blogcritics.org/books/article/book-review-the-road-by-cormac3/

The Road - symbolism in the novel

The road or journey has often been used as a metaphor for life itself – the journey from birth to death.
- the road is a journey which does beging with life andends with death but it is not the lie story of a single character, it is the story of what a man and boy do, where they are going and how they get there, with the boy begin bor around a quater of the way into the novel during the fathers recolection moments whilst the father dies at the end of the story, so yes the road is a novel which semi begins with life and ends with death but it also starts with death, there is death at the same time the son is born, then the rest of the book contain death untill the end where there is more death but this time of the fther and o there is only the life which survived to keep on going.

5+5=1

Women in the novel are seen as stronger through suicide.
The temptation of death.
A constant reminder of the struggle to survive.
Women are symbols of life.
Women are as bad if not worse than men in th novel
+
Suicide
Temptation
Survive
Symbols
Women
=
Temptation

the role of the mother in the novel seems to be more of a reminder to the man of how easy it is to give up on the world and to take the easy way out, she is the temptation of death for the man.

The Road - episodes and the context in which the woman is mentioned part 2

P.54 "The clocks stopped at 1:17. A long shear of light and then a serise of low concussions. He got up and went to the window. What is it? she said. He didnt answer. He went into the bathroom and threw the light switchbut the power was already gone. A dull rose glowin the widow-glass. He dropped to one knee and raised the lever to stop the tub and then turned on both taps as far as they would go. She was sanding in the doorway in her nightwear clutching the jamb, cradling her belly in one hand. What is it? she said. What is happening?"

Representation:
-Prepartion as the man knew somehow tha this was what he would have to do if this event occured.
-Pregnancy as the woman is shown to be far into her pregnancy as she has to hold her belly in one hand.
-Conspiracy as the man does not seem suprised and appears to know exactly what he needs to do.
-Death as the explosions in the distance could have people within them.

Thematic:
-Death is a major theme throughout the book this is the reason shown to be the start of the ongoing death march of the man and of the boy.
-Preparation as the man begins to prepare with the water so that the two of thm will have enough to drink in the coming apocolypse and not die as quickly as others.
-Life in death as this is the begining of the dead world and the woman is pregnant with the new life in the newly deceased world.
-Past and of memory as this event happend years preiously to the man and boys journey to the ocean.

Symbolic:
-Pregnancy of the life within.
-Explosions, the world is coming to an end, everything is dieing.
-Death.

Structural:
-Speech with out speech marks.
-No real emotion at the end of the world is shown. 

The Road - episodes and the context in which the woman is mentioned part 1

P.17 "From daydreams on the road there was no waking. He plodded on. He could remember everything of her save her scent. Seated in the theater with her beside him leaning forward listening to the music. Gold scrollwork and sconces and the tall columnar folds of the drapes at either side of the stage. She held his hand in her lap and he could feel the tops of her stockings through the thin stuff of her summer dress. Freeze this frame. Now call down your dark and your col and be damned."

Representation:
-The sanity of the man, walking along dreaming of what he had once had, years after it was taken from him.
-What he wants, the man wants to be with her but his mind is drawn to her more sexual acts like her holding his hand n her lap.
-His love for her, or could it be more is obsession with her, to still be seeing her in his minds eye years after she had gone to her new love, death.
-Memorys of her, her body, her feeling, but not her scent.
-Forgetting her slowly, forgetting her scent.
-Wealth as they were in a theater listening to music being played to them whilst surrounded by gold.

Themeatic:
-Sex.
-Memory.
-Regret.
-Hate(of himself for remembering this).
-Dreams.
-Art.
-Wealth.
-Love.
-Saddness.
-Loss.
-Past.

Symbolic:
-Sex through the womans actions, showing her to be more dominant.
-Love through how close they are and how she holds his hand.
-Maddness through the man not being able to escape this walking dream.
-The wealth shown in the memory could show how valued it is by him.
-Death as he tells the memory to be damned.

Structural:
-Longer sentences linger during the memory.
-Shorter sentences as he comes bck to realty.

The Road - why are there less refrences to women than there are to men?

-The man wants to forget his wife.
-They are unimportant to the daily life of the man and the boy.
-Women are symbolic of life and reproduction, there is no more life in the world, no more women.
-The woman could not kill the boy and so killed herself, she then had no reason to be in the narrative.
-The mother is dead.
-The relationship between the man and boy becomes more established than it would have if the woman were still alive.
-Mother earth is no more as the mothers are dead and so is the world.
-The boy would not be so nieve if the woman was with them.
-The mother was more resourceful knowing that if she stayed then she would suffer more than pain, so ended her part in the story before it even started.

Sunday 18 November 2012

The pied piper of Hamelin rewritten by Liam Swan in the style of Cormac McCarthy

Rats. Screaming and scurrying. Searching frantically for food. Eating everything that they could and then moving onto the buildings, then people. Savaging children and babies and making nest in men’s hats and woman’s clothes overpowering the speech in the streets and making the people of Hamelin despair. This continued until the people, while weakened and encompassed in the misery created by these rodents , made their plight known to the mayor, who, decided, that there was, nothing, that he, the mayor, could, possibly, do. Through the flying doors appeared a strange hooded multi coloured figure colours burning the mayors eyes with their ferocity a bone flute to his lips pressed the mayor instantly spellbound to this magician of music.

I am the answer to your rattish problem my lord.

What? Who are you?

As I said previously my lord, I am the answer to the problem of this town.

How did you find out about the rats?

Sir. I have been around the world searching for those i need of my talents; I freed the Japanese of their dragons and cleansed the mosquitos of England .Give me a thousand gilders and it will be as though the problem had never existed.

One thousand? If you’ve done what you say you have done and get rid of the rats I will give you fifty thousand gilders.

Done.

Bone flute resting on his hips he walked past the broken doors, away from the stunned leader of Hamelin and out onto the road. Moistened lips. A breath of cold air. A glance at the starry sky. A neutral tone emerged from the end of the bone flute, gradually building in complexity until its tone became indescribable to the on looking populace. But the rats understood. Screaming and scurrying. Searching frantically for the source of the sound, they ran to the multi coloured man who, kicking a boy out of his way, then at pace ran away from the village towards the river Weser. Where all rats jumped. One survived.

I was promised food and drink to my fill. That the rats should rejoice as the world had become one big larder that we the rats owned. I’m the last rat. I’m the only rat.

Laughing hysterically at the state of the sodden rats corpses the man started his journey to a cave to spend the night, he did not eat. Or drink. For why would a person such as he require such sustenance. He would return in the morning to the village, collect his reward, and then be free of pain, free of need, until his service was required somewhere again.

Rain poured down upon the town of Hamelin but even this could not keep back the celebration. Their scourge had been appeased. The children where happy beyond words as they ran around screaming in excitement, searching for food and sweets to celebrate with. A congregation appeared including the mayor and other elders of the village. All where smiling as though their wildest wishes had dreams had come true. Upon a rooftop another figure had emerged.

People of Hamelin. We are finally free of the rats! Go to your homes and houses, clear the nests and repair the holes. We will never be under the control of these vermin again!

I hope you have my money my lord.

What? Who said that?

The solution to the rats. The reason that they are gone!

Ah yes you.

Do you have my thousand gilders?

You see what we agreed in council was hasty, instead of a thousand let me give you fifty?

Sir do not go back on your word so easily.

Well either take it or leave it, your job is done and you've nothing to make me give you the sum for which you ask.

Then my lord mayor, heed my warning, I will return, and you had better be ready for when I do.

The figure of colour faded into the darkness, as though he were one with the nothingness. The mayor however knew that nothing could come from their meeting, for what could a man with a flute possibly do? Days passed and the mayor forgot about the strange, many coloured man. The village of Hamlin became a normal community where the children were looked upon by all as the joy and life of the village.

A figure emerged. Dressed in black armless hooded hunters clothes. Dripping red fluid as he walked. Contempt spread across his face. Pain visible in his eyes. And the bone flute at his bloody mouth. They had done this to him. Fluid lips. His life blood fuelling his flute. No breath was needed as a cry emerged from within. The sweetest noise followed, and then, so did the children, their parents tried to beg them to stop, but, the music stopped all motion for them. Parents paralyzed and with smiles of joy cut. Across their faces, the children were happy and so followed the sweet sound until they saw the musician, his flesh decomposing as he moved. But they only saw the deliverer of their promised dream. Away the children danced in the road, the demons lure pulling them along. The eyes of every adult in Hamlin stuck on the sight of the hunter garbed figure, corroding, melting away, and revealing his true nature. He was not the answer to the village’s problems. He was the scourge.

 Up the streets danced the children along up to the river where they stopped. Looking into the Weser’s waters only to jump and skip on up the path to the mountains. As the children walked up the mountain path they heard the music splutter and begin weaving pictures in their minds of tree’s in full blossom and fruits floating through the air to them, of a wondrous life where no wrong could be done and that their happiness was all that matterd in a world of dreams. The path they were walking on had become dark; the darkness was creating a tunnel to a place below. They were losing control; deep in an emotionless slumber they were walking, dead to the world with only the lucid dream created in their minds to comfort them.
They stopped, though the children knew no difference, and the thing before them blowing into his bone opening a gapping cavern the darkness clawing towards them. Death was at hand, he made the children march into the opening; these would be his payment, his reward. He would drain them and become himself again, able to walk the earth once more until someone else refused him of his payment.

He forgot one boy. One small boy with a limp. A boy kicked by a man with unusual strength while walking out the town with rats on tow. This boy had walked behind his friends, the dream was not real to him so he had stopped listening and hobbled along at the back of the exodus, watching with wonder at the stages of the pipers physical state, how the man had started looking like a man just ill, then the skin had melted away and muscle had fallen as he was walking, playing the bone flute, his clothes forming a cloak while all that remained of the man was his bones. As the procession moved into the darkness the boy had stopped, knowing who it really was who had taken away his friends. The boy watched as the death took his friends into the cave. Staring back at the boy stood the skeleton, his bone flute in its hand, while a cacophony of screams emerged from the cave. After a second they ended. The skeleton however was changing, muscles winding around its body, organs bulging in between, beating as his movement returned, skin then covering the corpse. The clothes had changed into a many coloured garb. And as the boy started walking backwards the paralysis of fear leaving him, the figure put a long finger to his lips and disappeared.

The boy never saw any of the other children again but the memory of death haunted him, knowing that one day he would have to meet him again.

Tuesday 13 November 2012

Timing

P. 36    "He woke whimpering in the night" this quote shows the effect of the night upon the characters, that they were vulnerable and their emotions started to show through, the effect of being vulnerable in the dark made them scared.
P. 87    "He woke in the night" not only does this show that it is night but also that the night means nothing to the characters, that they would wake in the night as they would in the morning, that time of day ment nothing to them.
P. 93    "In the evening they tramped across a field" again showing that even though it is evening they continue as though it was not as the time of day means nothing to them.
             "tomorrow they would find something" stating hope for the next day, this quote was unusal because it is the only moment when eitherof the characters actually experiences hope for anything.
P. 230  "an hour later" the novel does not tell you what the time is atall, so this quote only produces confusion into when the time was before and what the time is now, where in the day where they? and was it morning or afternoon or evening?
P. 300  "He slept close to his father that night and held him but when he woke in the morning his father
             was cold and stiff." shows that the boy only woke up in the nights as he was afraid of something happening to his father, as he did not wake up through the night, this shows that he believes that his father is in a better place giving the idea that the boy has some knowledge of religeon.
P. 301  "He stayed three days" shows that the boy had nowhere to go, that the last person who meent anything to him was now dead and that the only people out there cold not be trusted.

The end

The begining of the end is where the man and boy arrive at the beach.
This is because the journey that the two had been on for the entrety of the book is now over and they have nothing left to do but eat what they have found on the ship and the slowly die.
The cares of the two are shown at the end here as the father dosent apologise for the world being the way it is, the state of their lives or the hoplesness of their lives, he instead says "sorry it's not blue" about the sea, thus showing that the two are realastic only caring about what is there and what wonders they want to see before their deaths.
The boy hopes for colour but in the end everything is "Cold, desolate, birdless, vast and cold" and gray. Everything on the road was the same, the ocean shows that the rest of the world is like this too.

The ending is when the father dies.
this is because everything so far in the book has been from the fathers point of veiw, this is the switchover to the son and the establishment of a new norm. Also throughout the novel the characters of the father and son are emotionless but at this point the characters show these previously unknown emotions. "you said you would never leave me" showing that the boy is still here and healhy beside his dieing father, that he will have to go on without the man. "I know. I'm sorry. You have my whole heart." the father finally lets his love for the child show through his words instead of his actions, the boy beys "Just take me with you, please" but because the father knows he loved the boy he could not bring himself to kill the boy showing that his wife was right at the begining of the novel, fulfilling the boys prophecy.

The ending is when the father dies.
- establishment of new norm
- theme of religeon "the breath of God"
- surrounding are not described as before.
- the awarness of time becomes fluidand nknown to the reader.
- links to his mother.

Deus ex machina - God is in the machine

Monday 12 November 2012

The Road - Task 2 - episodes (part 6)

- the theft of the man and boy's belongings (pp. 270-278)
The main impact that this episode has is that of hope, McCarthy conveys this hope by telling us that the theif had come from a commune of people with laws and food, hope as that is somewhere that the man and boy could go to. The man and boy have a cart full of food and know that somewhere nearby there is a place of relative saftey, they could be going to the commune themselves after this event of they could continue walking with there large supply of food, however the death of the father could come before either as now the father cant even keep at a "jogtrot" without leaning over and coughing, ths could be fregrounding his death as slowly his cough has been getting worse through the novel. A moment of increased tension is at the point when the man discovers that all his possesions had been stolen, at this point he starts cursing himself for being careless with how he had left all the possesions under a "sail cloth" with no real security. The character of the boy is shown to have changed drastically as he becomes calm and serious when telling his father that instead of the man needing to worry it is the boys job to as he knows that his father is going to die and that he "is the one" who will be left alone. Speech and the type of languge are the same throughout the novel, the only parts which are different are in he story with the addition of the fahers knowledge of "communes". McCarthy shows that it is possible that the man and boy originally came from  commune as the father knows about them but is not in them now, hinting at how he may have been kicked out or walked off himself. the main importance of this episode is to show that there are places with people and law and order, but the father stays away from them for some reason.

Task 2 - episodes (part 5)

- getting to the shore (pp. 227 - 230)
This episode shows how uneventful the lifes of the man and boy where. The writer gains this responce as he keeps events to a mininum and instead concentrates on getting the two characters to the destination that they have been trying to get to for the entirety of the novel.
The ocean is the final destination of the man, all he wants throughout the novel is to get there and now tha he has, there is no real need for him to keep going. He has acheived his goal, he could die pretty soon after this event, leaving the boy with the gun. there is no real change of mood or any tension in this episode everything just seems grim and dark,  "the world grew darker daily", everything about the father seems to be getting dimer and closer to the end of his journey. The consant dark quotes from the father give the impression that he is getting more tired than usual and losing hope of survival while the boy has started learning from the man and actally plots the rest of their journey, keeping track of the time and where they were  "He had the names of towns and rivers by heart and he measured their progress daily." the language s the same as therest of the novel except darker imagery is used, "the world grew darker daily." as if everything is about o come to an end. All the language that the father uses if foregrounding his death and the hoplessnes of his and the boys continuation. This is a key episode as it shows the ending of the fathers enforced march and leaves the two characters not knowing where to go next.

Friday 9 November 2012

Task 2 - episodes (part 4)

- the baby on the spit (pp. 210-215)
this episode impacts on the reader by showing how far people are willing to go to go without starving in a dead world, the "charred human infant headless and gutted and blackening on the spit" show that the young have no place in the post apocolyptic world and that they are easy food for the elder people walking along. The writer makes this stand out by not changing the rhythme or tone, just letting the event take place making it seem the norm, from the fathers reaction of just picking up the boy and whispering "I'm sorry." he could have been witness to this kind of thing before as other than his action with his son he shows no emotion towards it unlike how he had been repulsed by the semi-eaten people in the cellar. at the end of the episode we are told that they have eaten the last of their supplies and wilol begin to weaken within two days, this could be that they have finally run out of food and they are going to die or it could continue the trend of the rest of the novel in which just as the end seems inevitable they stumble onto anther supplie of food. A moment of increased tension is when the boy finds that the "black thing...skewerd over the coals" is infact a recently born baby that had been beheded and gutted, then over cooked and burnt. The tension is increased as the rhythm of the story lowers and then speeds up as this revalation appears. This episode is very much like when a number of semi-eaten people are found in a cellar as the rhythm fluctuations are similar. The language used echoes that of the previous eisodes as it is simple and yet affective at numbing emotion from this horrific scene. Death is foregrounded by the charred infant and the lack of food which is with the man and boy. This episode is key as it shows the desperation that the man and boy could get to, they could become cannibals in order to stay alive.

5+5=1

It means nothing to be alive in a dead world.
The thoughts running through a despairing fathers mind.
Using punctuation to create tension e.g. stalling as the father tried to stifle his coughs using full stops.
The fathers realization that he can not kill his son.
The characters scream at the reader at many points in the novel.
+
Nothing
Despairing
Stalling
Realization
Scream
=
Horror

Task 2 - episodes (part 3)

- finding the cellar of naked and mutilated people (pp. 112-121)
This episode gives the impresion of horror and misery as it plays upon the reallity of human farming for food in the novel. The writer evoked this responce by playing on older horror story lines to give a semi-original idea of what could be in a cellar under an old dserted house, the writer also slows the rhythme of the story, then speeds it up to build suspence to a false mment of horror "an old mattress darkly stained" so that the true moment of horror is realized "Huddeled against the back wall were naked people, male and female, all trying to hide, sheilding their faces with their hands." which shocks the reader as nothing like this was expected. What happens next is clear, they would run away and continue their journey, more weary of strangers than before, but also now that the father has come to the revolation that he could never kill his son, we now that the boy will survive atleast even if the father does not. At the begining of the epiode time seems to slow as the father searches through the house and then goe to the back garden, time then speeds up as the half eaten people are found and the father and son run off, as time was slowing down however tension was building that something might happen. The fathers true character is realized in this episode as he realises that he could never kill his son as he questions himself "Is there such a being within you of which you know nothing?" also reffering to his son as "beloved" he tells the reader that he would never killhis son and that as much as he might want to, to save him from pain, he cant bring himself to kill the boy. McCarthy uses the same style of writting as he does in other areas of the novle but he gives the veiw from the mind of the father aswell as the other veiws that he normally gives. This is a key episode as it shows the kinds of people who are after him, and the difference between them and the bad guys.

instead of twittering

2nd paragraph, page 120
shows the thoughts which were running through the head of the father, this paragraph shows the fathers desperation by his thinking "What if it dosent fire? It has to fire. What if it dosent fire?" the desperation is reinforced by the repation. The paragraph also shows the fathers own self doubt as he knows that he could never bring himself to kill his son as he asks himself "Is there such a being within you of which you know nothing?" thus showing that he knows that he could never bring himself to harm his son who he referse to as "beloved". This paragraph is more about the detail and depth put into the fathers character than anything else.

Thursday 8 November 2012

Task 2 - episodes (part 2)

- shooting the 'roadrat' (pp. 62-69)
The episode shows how easily life is extinguished by anyone with the ability and the animalistic desperation felt by all people when faced with life and death. The writter achieved this responce by mainly influencing the characters speech into short threatening whispers, as though the character of the father knew hat he had to kill the "roadrat" and that in turn the "roadrat" would have to do something in turn to survive. This episode implies that in the future plot one of the two main characters may die, when the other is helpless to do anything for them, this is because if the father had not got the gun then he would hav ebeen helpless to go along with the "roadrat", if the boy was ever in the position of the father needing him, but the child being unable to help then the father would die. The scene seems to get darker with the enitial hiding away from the people and truck to killing one of the "roadrat"'s was a leap that the father would not have taken as after this event, only one of the two has the easy way out of shooting themselves. This event shows the degree's to which the father would have let people live as he tries to do everything in his power to get the "roadrat" to follow them, before letting him loose so he could get a good head start away from those likely to kill them, this scene also shows that the father was prepared to give his wa out of life to the "roadrat" in order to ensure his sons and his own survival. Repition is used to reasure the boy by his father saying "It's okay." and the tone used throughout the novel is also present in this as it shows the short sentence structure and few commas. This is a key episode as it gives mortality to the characters and shows how prepared the father is to ensure that they survive.

Task 2 - episodes (part 1)

writting about in relation to the questions-
 How the episode impacted on you?
What was the writer doing to evoke this response?
Plot progression (what will happen next?)
Your experience (change of mood? A ligher moment? Increase or release of tension?)
How does this develop character and their relationship?
The techniques employed by McCarthy. Is the language in keeping with the rest of the novel? Are there particular symbols or images that are foregrounded?
Is this in fact a key episode? What makes it important? How does it stand out in a novel without chapters or chapter titles?

- coming across the man who has been struck by lightening (pp. 50-53)
The episode shows the reality of death to the charaters in the road, that not only they are at risk in the world and that it is not just other people who could be trying to kill them ,but the world itself seeming to lash out at what is left of humanity. To evoke this responce McCarthy writes as though nothing has happend to the characters untill they see someone "shuffling along the road before them", nothing is seen as wrong untill this character sits down and looks at the floor as they pass, as  though his situation is his fault, that he did something to the earth and is now getting revenge from the earth and sky. the description of the character is also given in stark reallity "one of his eyes was burnt shut". The father makes clear that if they shared their food that they would die also, this foregrounds the fact that they are soon going to starve, brining up the idea of them dieing soon in the book. A moment of tension is when the man and child walk past the lightning struck character, horror dawn on the boy when he see's the extent of the mans injury and panic strikes as he realises there is nothing he can do to help "Can't we haelp him? Papa?". This episode shows the fathers domiination of the child, as the boy at first struggles with the father, trying to get help for the man but his father expels these arguments knowing that there is nothing that they could do, the boy is rthen forced to take this veiw on the matter "He's going to die. We cant share of we'll die too. I know". The techniques employed by McCarthy are those of the road story genre as the man and boy are walking along a road meeting new people ad then moving on like the lightning struck man, he dosent use much gramma to keep in keeping wth the rest of the novel and he uses complex words every s often in an other wise bland and simple speach and narrative language. This is a key episode as it shows that not everyone is out to kill them and that nature is as much their enemy as any other person is.

pictures reminicent of the road




Friday 2 November 2012

task 1 - quotes work

+ = quote
- = what the extracts tell me about (not necessarily in order): the type of novel it might be, the story, themes, characters and relationships, the way the story might be told.

+"this is my child, he said. I wash a dead mans brains out of his hair. That is my job."
-Links to zombies as to kill a zombie you get it's brains, the man is washing this out of his sons hair.
-Shows that this could be a horror story as it links to zombies.
-Themes are violence, horror and cleanliness.
-We learn that the son is afraid of/ traumitized because of the brains as he cannot clean himself and that the father must do this for him.
-This quote is from the fathers perspective.

+"Yes I am the one."
-The novel could be centerd around a single character and their continuing journey.
-Shows that it could be an adventure story with there being the hero, the one who could do something.
-The theme could be of singular belief as the speaker believes that they are the one.
-The child is speaking, so he could have just been reasured of something by the father.
-The story is told from the childs perspective.

+"Tomatoes, peaches, beans, apricots. Canned hams. Corned beef."
-The novel could be about the wonder of things long forgotten and left in the past, that people now dream of.
-Shows that it could be tradegy as something must have happend to make such normal things become wonders.
-Theme is of wonder at how a stash of food like this could have survived unknown for so long.
-The father is suprised and happy at their find, knowing that they were no longer goning to starve.
-The story is told slowly from the fathers perspective as he does not believe what he see's.

+"Are we still the good guys, he said."
-Could be a simple novel with clearly definded good and bad guys, where the characters do something which makes them forget whether they are good or bad.
-Shows that the story could be a tradegy with the good guys fading into bad.
-Theme of good and bad and of confusion.
-The son losing hope and needing reassurance rom his father.
-Story is told from the fathers recolection as he states things in past tense.

+"We should go, papa, he said. Yes, the man said. But he didn't."
-Indicates that the novel is slow and contradictory.
-Shows that the story could be a horror.Because in all horror movies a character says that they should go, but they dont and something bad either happens or is seen.
-Themes could be time, moving on and searching.
-Shows that the father is dominant as he agrees with and yet ignores his sons speech.
-The story is tlod slowly and from the viewpoint of an unknown auditor.

+"The snow fell nor did it cease to fall."
-Indicates that the novel is constant, never finishing and ongoing.
-Shows the story is devoid and ongoing, a road story.
-The theme could be continuity.
-No feeling shown towards the snow.
-Story could be told from various view points, tells of the ongoing lives of the father and the son.

+"Okay? Okay?"
-Could be a questioning novel, questining reason and existance.
-Shows the story wants to know its meaning, whats going on.
-Theme is questioning, whether things are okay.
-Father asking his son if he is okay and as there is repition shown he is worried.
-The story is told from the fathers perspective and is full of panic.